White House Press Office Release

My brother Sean sent me the link to the U.S. government “Plain Language” website today: http://www.plainlanguage.gov/whatisPL/.  I don’t think the White House Press Office is paying much attention to it. My rewrite is below the redline.

Zitovosky press release

Source: https://www.whitehouse.gov/the-press-office/2015/06/09/statement-press-secretary-zivotofsky-v-kerry

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